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Re: Parent's Visitations [message #16795 is a reply to message #7908 ] Mon, 17 November 2008 03:49 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Violet  is currently offline Violet
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Yes, their plan only has the slightest chance if there opposition is equally stupid as to hide threats to the family. And since Whateley's policy on threatening family is well known I doubt Chakra is that stupid.

Of course it may be a set-up for the Christmas story, if they attack while Chakra is at home rather than kidnap parents and send a message to Chakra at Whateley then so long as they prevent Toni sending a message back to school they've got a hope. The implications was that they were thinking of the first plan but they might have a chance to think it through.

And finally it could be a plot for after graduation, but its way to early to drop a hint for that.


Dilbert: You were always a great hero of mine
Leonardo da Vinci: Is that so?
Dilbert: Yes I tried to model my carea after yours: Engineer, inventor, artist
Leonardo da Vinci: No no no, those were all sidelines, I am at heart a businessman
Re: Parent's Visitations [message #16808 is a reply to message #16793 ] Mon, 17 November 2008 11:05 Go to previous messageGo to next message
tenwaters  is currently offline tenwaters
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KenJ wrote on Mon, 17 November 2008 02:43

But if they threaten Chaka's family, isn't Whateley sort of duty bound to wipe their organization from the face of the Earth? Possibly with the help of the Syndicate and others that finance Whateley.

In other words, isn't this monumentally stupid?


It should be interesting how the story will answer questions like -- Why Chaka? I am thinking this is some marshal arts group that has some task only she can hope to preform.

[Updated on: Mon, 17 November 2008 11:07]


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Re: Parent's Visitations [message #16820 is a reply to message #16808 ] Mon, 17 November 2008 13:38 Go to previous messageGo to next message
XaltatunOfAcheron  is currently offline XaltatunOfAcheron
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tenwaters wrote on Mon, 17 November 2008 11:05

KenJ wrote on Mon, 17 November 2008 02:43

But if they threaten Chaka's family, isn't Whateley sort of duty bound to wipe their organization from the face of the Earth? Possibly with the help of the Syndicate and others that finance Whateley.

In other words, isn't this monumentally stupid?


It should be interesting how the story will answer questions like -- Why Chaka? I am thinking this is some marshal arts group that has some task only she can hope to preform.


Well, way back in the early stories there was a brief discussion about Far Eastern attitudes toward blacks in relationship to dangers to Chaka.

Then in this one there's a big, flaming hint. Who do we know who's Oriental, a member of the Bad Seeds, and whose parents are insufficiently well known that they could slide someone else in their place without anyone knowing?

Xaltatun


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Re: Parent's Day Vignette [message #17128 is a reply to message #16820 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 11:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
XaltatunOfAcheron  is currently offline XaltatunOfAcheron
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Nice Parent's Day Vignette, Bek! I liked the original title better, though:

Quoth the Ninja, What? Again!

Seeing the Vindicators get themselves trashed was amusing. Vindicators, Avaunt! And the byplay with Captain Canada! and Peeper's and Greasy's comment at the end.

And now I'm going to have to agree with whoever suggested that the spy was from the Yama Dojo. It makes a bit more sense than my suggestion.

Xaltatun


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Re: Parent's Day Vignette [message #17129 is a reply to message #17128 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 12:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Sir Lee  is currently offline Sir Lee
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Well, among all the fun, there was the ONLY mention about Hank's family visiting.

But I think Chaka will prefer using her own "Chaka Chaka Bang Bang" variant instead of the "Heavenly Bolt of Phallic Might" technique. For one thing, her way is faster. For another, "Phallic Might" doesn't match her clothing (and, presumably, soon won't match her body).

I think that's the first time we have seen the Fey's "Protective Aura" in action. And man, HOW effective it turned out to be! Too bad it isn't always usable, though.


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Re: Parent's Day Vignette [message #17130 is a reply to message #17128 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 12:30 Go to previous messageGo to next message
KenJ  is currently offline KenJ
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Quote:

And now I'm going to have to agree with whoever suggested that the spy was from the Yama Dojo. It makes a bit more sense than my suggestion. Xaltatun

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(Of course, that might just mean that now were both wrong. *sigh*)
Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17136 is a reply to message #7908 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 13:40 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Bookworm  is currently offline Bookworm
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You've forgotten something.

It could also be the Black Tong (I think that was the name) that was targeting Chou, as well. They might want to stop the Soke No Do before it gets started.
Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17151 is a reply to message #7908 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 17:17 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Heh.

How stupid can the Yama Dojo twerps get? Show up on Parent's Day, which is a 'green' day, with all the students looking for ways to impress their respective elders? Bad move.


Misty : “It’s not going to be like this every day, is it?”
“Lord, no,” Jadis replied. “Sometimes, it gets weird.”

Hank Declan shook his head, disbelieving. "Tell me I did not just see them roshambo for victory."
Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17161 is a reply to message #7908 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 18:39 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I suppose they're gonna be known far and wide as Yama Dojo's Team Rocket from now on.

If Whateley want's to get back at Yama Dojo for all of their previous transgressions, they could just send Team Kimba to Japan, march up to their front gates (one I'm assuming to be of a traditional Japanese style), take their signboard and replace it with one that says "Whateley Is Just Better." and get Fey to hex it so it can't be removed until the Dojo master says "Whateley Is Just Better." a thousand times with true sincerity.

It'll drive them up the wall since it qualifies as Dojo Destroying especially because they are ninjas and it is done by stealth.

[Updated on: Sun, 23 November 2008 18:41]


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Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17167 is a reply to message #17151 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 19:01 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Abbacor wrote on Sun, 23 November 2008 17:17

Heh.

How stupid can the Yama Dojo twerps get? Show up on Parent's Day, which is a 'green' day, with all the students looking for ways to impress their respective elders? Bad move.


That was, I suspect, part of the problem they were set. And it's also why I suspect the Yama Dojo - if that was their spies, then they had a first-hand look at what actually happened.

BTW - props to the Vindicator's mage. She deserves some recognition for spotting them and knocking out their stealth spell. At least I think it was her.

Xaltatun


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Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17172 is a reply to message #17167 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 20:38 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Abbacor  is currently offline Abbacor
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote on Sun, 23 November 2008 18:01

Abbacor wrote on Sun, 23 November 2008 17:17

Heh.

How stupid can the Yama Dojo twerps get? Show up on Parent's Day, which is a 'green' day, with all the students looking for ways to impress their respective elders? Bad move.


That was, I suspect, part of the problem they were set. And it's also why I suspect the Yama Dojo - if that was their spies, then they had a first-hand look at what actually happened.

BTW - props to the Vindicator's mage. She deserves some recognition for spotting them and knocking out their stealth spell. At least I think it was her.

Xaltatun


I don't think that they were tasked to retrieve the MCH in such a specific manner. The standard procedure is most likely to give the ninja, or team, their objective and allow them to work out the method for themselves.

They were originally trying to steal the head of Poe and failed, spectacularly. They got captured, failed to destroy their school symbol, and LOST a piece of equipment their dojo would consider to be proprietary. They lost MAJOR face in this, and would feel bound to rectify the loss of both honor and equipment in a manner to greatly dis-honor their opponents.

Think about it. These are students of a 'traditional' Ninja Dojo. While they may be using modern materials and equipment, the whole training and indoctrination process is still probably very fuedal-era in context and ideology. There is a whole ninja attitude going on here of "they are lazy weak gaijin". So they chose a timing that, had it been successful, would most likely have restored their honor and then some. Unfortunately, they didn't do their research deeply enough and failed to take into account the average attitude of the students at Whateley on the chosen day.

It also looked to me like they were attempting to use an obscuring technique they either didn't know how to use correctly, or they failed to pull off correctly since the first person to see them was a base-line parent (Toni's mom, Valerie).


Misty : “It’s not going to be like this every day, is it?”
“Lord, no,” Jadis replied. “Sometimes, it gets weird.”

Hank Declan shook his head, disbelieving. "Tell me I did not just see them roshambo for victory."
Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17173 is a reply to message #17172 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 21:07 Go to previous messageGo to next message
XaltatunOfAcheron  is currently offline XaltatunOfAcheron
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Abbacor wrote on Sun, 23 November 2008 20:38

XaltatunOfAcheron wrote on Sun, 23 November 2008 18:01

Abbacor wrote on Sun, 23 November 2008 17:17

Heh.

How stupid can the Yama Dojo twerps get? Show up on Parent's Day, which is a 'green' day, with all the students looking for ways to impress their respective elders? Bad move.


That was, I suspect, part of the problem they were set. And it's also why I suspect the Yama Dojo - if that was their spies, then they had a first-hand look at what actually happened.

BTW - props to the Vindicator's mage. She deserves some recognition for spotting them and knocking out their stealth spell. At least I think it was her.

Xaltatun


I don't think that they were tasked to retrieve the MCH in such a specific manner. The standard procedure is most likely to give the ninja, or team, their objective and allow them to work out the method for themselves.



Well, yes. But the day could have been set to make it harder. "You screwed up. Now try this..."

Abbacor


It also looked to me like they were attempting to use an obscuring technique they either didn't know how to use correctly, or they failed to pull off correctly since the first person to see them was a base-line parent (Toni's mom, Valerie).


We don't know that. What we know is that the first person in the story to spot them was Valerie. The Vindicators popped up awfully fast.

Xaltatun


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Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17174 is a reply to message #7908 ] Sun, 23 November 2008 21:07 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Bookworm  is currently offline Bookworm
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I'd correct that to "an apparent base-line, Toni's mom".

Remember, there are mutants out there that don't have anything obvious to distinguish them from other folks. For that matter, if all they ended up with was one day having better eyesight, they might never even know themselves.

I mean, I can hear into ultrasonics. There are some stores I can't go into (alarm systems), and I can hear a flyback transformer going out. If someone suddenly got the ability to hear higher (or lower), they probably wouldn't even mention it, and other people wouldn't think twice about it.

Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17281 is a reply to message #17174 ] Tue, 25 November 2008 11:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Geminii  is currently offline Geminii
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I'm not even sure if it would count as a mutant trait unless it was accompanied by an activated mutant gene. Medical history is full of weird enough stuff as it is.

Oh, and I'm with you on the hearing thing. I used to work as 'the computer guy' in an office back when it was all low-quality CRT monitors, and it always freaked people out that I could tell whether a monitor was on or off from across the room when it was facing the other way. I used to say it was my Secret Computer Guy Powers.
Re: Parent's Visitations [message #17293 is a reply to message #17281 ] Tue, 25 November 2008 16:10 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
Warren  is currently offline Warren
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Hell, I can almost always hear the flyback transformer in CRT monitors. When I was younger I could tell when I light switch had been turned on because I would hear the wires in the walls.


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