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Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #56286 is a reply to message #56156 ] Mon, 02 April 2012 15:12 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Dr. Bender wrote on Sat, 31 March 2012 18:52
Whateley. It's been waiting in the wings for a while. Trinity after Fate gets done.

In a way it makes me sad to know that there will ever be an end to your great Exaltated story *sigh*. It's a great story thus far and I can't wait to see what part 6 will be like.
Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #56337 is a reply to message #54386 ] Tue, 03 April 2012 21:00 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Oh, I am planning a sequel to Fate that takes place in Great Forks.


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Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #56345 is a reply to message #56337 ] Wed, 04 April 2012 08:57 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Dr. Bender wrote on Wed, 04 April 2012 03:00
Oh, I am planning a sequel to Fate that takes place in Great Forks.

Will Tetsu still be the main character in the sequel? Just curious.

Edit: I like your 'location', Dr.Bender Razz.

[Updated on: Wed, 04 April 2012 09:00]

Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #56347 is a reply to message #54386 ] Wed, 04 April 2012 12:12 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Yes, Tetsu will still be the main character.

And don't blame me for the name. Razz


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Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #56645 is a reply to message #54386 ] Thu, 12 April 2012 16:11 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5
"Regular mice don't have black feathers on their heads when you're really looking at them," Pensri chuckled.
ARRRRG.
The Tell does not work like this.

This is just one of the things that are Just So Wrong in the story, but this one is a pet peeve of mine. Why do people have to keep using the "the Tell is always the same and will be alien & mark you as a Lunar" when the chapter about it is clear that it adapts to each form to be natural. A mouse wouldn't have feathers, but a streak of fur that's black like a raven (vaguely shaped like a feather).
Which Pensri would recognize as a Tell, since it she knows the Lunar it belongs to and would be able to recognize through it.
Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #56658 is a reply to message #54386 ] Thu, 12 April 2012 23:38 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Actually, the rules on The Tell on pg. 130 of the Manual of Exalted Power: Lunars are deliberately written vaguely.

"A Lunar whose Tell is a barbed scorpian tail might have... a small barb hidden in the fur."

"The Tell is usually thematic and only occasionally blatant."

ie, sometimes it is.

Not that it actually matters since noticing the Tell is entirely a function of its magical ability to escape notice.

Your interpretation is valid but it doesn't invalidate my interpretation for Valdis.

Valdis' Tell is a bit less subtle than usual, yes, but that's part of her character. I really liked the image of the tribal warrior-woman with the feathers in her hair and since she's a Full Moon as well as one of the more fourthright characters in the story I chose to express that a bit with her Tell.

I'm aware that not everything in the story is RAW (Rules As Written for those who don't follow RPGs), however if I did that the fights would be boring Chungian combat. Heck, the last Errata opened up alot of social combat charms that I deliberately haven't touched. Sometimes it is my lack of knowledge but alot of the time it's me simplifying things for the sake of either brevity or to express a concept for those readers who aren't familiar with Exalted (most of them if my feedback's correct).


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Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #56659 is a reply to message #54386 ] Fri, 13 April 2012 03:56 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Having the feathers in the hair in human form is fine, people have that. For the mouse it is just ridiculous.
Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #56662 is a reply to message #56659 ] Fri, 13 April 2012 04:37 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Sojiro wrote on Fri, 13 April 2012 03:56
Having the feathers in the hair in human form is fine, people have that. For the mouse it is just ridiculous.

Uh... no, people don't naturally grow feathers dude. I could call that statement rediculous but I know that wasn't you were attempting to communicate.

So, you personally find a mouse with feathers rediculous. I don't. I can sympathize but it's your own problem and not mine.


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Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #58716 is a reply to message #54386 ] Mon, 21 May 2012 20:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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*de-lurk*

Well, I was hoping another poster would come and bug you so I can get another tidbit of your story, Most Horrifying Dr. Bender, but it appears it doesn't happen. Same. Anyway...

Roughly speaking, what is Tetsu's Attribute priorities? My guess is Physical/Mental/Social. Since lugging around daiklave take a lot of Strength for normal human. And after he is changed by Sanejin (and Luna), mechanic-wise, what actually happened? Does Luna force Tetsu to redistribute her Attribute and adding some skills, or what?

Oh, and thanks for giving marvelous example what kind of epic deed mortal need to do to become Eclipse caste. Insightful.


War is war; destruction is destruction. You think this is obvious. But war is not destruction, it is victory. To achieve victory, simply appear to give the opponent what he wants and he will go away, or join you in your quest for additional power.
Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #58720 is a reply to message #54386 ] Mon, 21 May 2012 21:15 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Roughly speaking, Tetsu started out as a Mortal character made with Scroll of Heroes. To top it off, he had some added XP from previous unseen adventures. Because of that, his Attribute priorities didn't mean much but were probably Physical/Social/Mental (with Appearance as a dump stat). In addition, I used a Merit to raise his Strength to 6 dots.

Now, I've said it before but it bares repeating, I wouldn't give a PC the abilities I'm giving Tetsu. What works in fiction =/= a good play experience.

That being said, I don't want to spoil Luna and Tetsu's relationship too much. However, if you look at Luna's stats in Glories Most High you can see that Luna can do pretty much anything she wants to a mortal practically out of hand (and I take the view that the Incarnae are really more powerful than they're presented to be in Glories, they have the support of the whole of Yu Shan and Creation behind them!).

Some examples: Raising Attributes to 6 dots (like Appearance), Adding the more expensive version of the Priest merit, 'teaching' Lunar charms (like all the second Exellencies), teaching spirit charms (though I didn't give out All-Encompassing Shapechange), mutations, merits... the sky's the limit.

If you want exact statistics, I don't have them. See, if I followed the rules of Exalted too closely, well, combat would be boring for a start (who can run out of Motes to PD with first?). I also use lots and lots of stunting.


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Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #58744 is a reply to message #54386 ] Tue, 22 May 2012 07:47 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Huh. I was kinda expecting Charisma, since it appears Tetsu use his ugliness really well to distract most people. Ugh, always get confused between Charisma and Appearance...


War is war; destruction is destruction. You think this is obvious. But war is not destruction, it is victory. To achieve victory, simply appear to give the opponent what he wants and he will go away, or join you in your quest for additional power.
Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #58776 is a reply to message #54386 ] Tue, 22 May 2012 19:07 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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If you want a character that's really ugly but intimidating, go for low App, high Cha. It's how the Deathknights work.


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Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #58783 is a reply to message #54386 ] Tue, 22 May 2012 20:46 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I sort of figured he had high appearance, and a negative effect(forgot the term), that lowered it to 1 or whatever, given that he apparently was fairly handsome before drinking tainted water.
Re: Fate and the Iron Tiger Part 5 [message #58785 is a reply to message #54386 ] Tue, 22 May 2012 21:12 Go to previous message
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Nah, that's just backstory shenannigans.


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