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Re: Life, Death, and Rebirth Discussion [message #46471 is a reply to message #45783 ] Fri, 07 October 2011 20:24 Go to previous messageGo to next message
psy-chic is currently offline psy-chic
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So, now that I've got the next part up, what do you guys think?

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Re: Life, Death, and Rebirth Discussion [message #50191 is a reply to message #46471 ] Mon, 26 December 2011 03:35 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Verina is currently offline Verina
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Way too short!!
What little I've read so far has been pretty good, but the chapters are way to short.
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Re: Life, Death, and Rebirth Discussion [message #50193 is a reply to message #50191 ] Mon, 26 December 2011 04:04 Go to previous messageGo to next message
beyogi is currently offline beyogi
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Verina wrote on Mon, 26 December 2011 09:35
Way too short!!
What little I've read so far has been pretty good, but the chapters are way to short.


I totally agree! No way that hartford would just let her go like this. On the other hand, why was girly in Poe before? I can't remember her being TG... was she a lesbian?

Thank you for writing this interesting story.

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Re: Life, Death, and Rebirth Discussion [message #50216 is a reply to message #50193 ] Mon, 26 December 2011 19:56 Go to previous message
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Yes. It was in the second chapter. I'm sorry about the length, but between writer's block, school, and the inevitable grounding that keeps me from writing, I have to make them short and sweet.

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