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Tue, 17 May 2011 17:40  |
 sleethr
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PDF Repost of Chapters 1-26 has been posted to the Fan Fiction Forum
I can do an ePub if that is better for more folks or just PM the ePub version.
I might repost everything, but that might take a bit due to all the formatting.
[Updated on: Tue, 17 May 2011 17:42]
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| Re: Whisper [message #39070 is a reply to message #39063 ] |
Tue, 17 May 2011 18:36  |
polarone
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| beyogi wrote on Tue, 17 May 2011 18:09 | Thank you for reposting the story. You are an awesome author btw... Did you ever consider writing professionally?...
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Shhhh! You might give him ideas, if he goes pro then he might have less time to write for us.
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| Re: Whisper [message #39071 is a reply to message #39061 ] |
Tue, 17 May 2011 18:41 |
sleethr
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Thanks,
I have been a bit slower with the last chapters. I have been trying to use some of XoA's advice to improve my writing and that has slowed things down. Plus, work has been busy the last few weeks...no comment. 
I would love to have Whisper, Syn and Zelda team up at Whateley. Stainless would be cool to work in also with the military background for her character.
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| Re: Whisper [message #39398 is a reply to message #39061 ] |
Fri, 20 May 2011 15:23 |
jhn1
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I still think the spell as spam makes a potent "crisis" (and we have all heard of what government slavemasters think about crisis-es)
even if they don't exist "in the wild", one Los Alamos leak and the anti-virus companies will scramble to be the first to release "protective" products, at a modest price, after properly panicking the population, of course.
And you thought government recruiters were bad at Whately. Let loose Tammy from NEXT.
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| Re: Whisper [message #39452 is a reply to message #39405 ] |
Sat, 21 May 2011 06:40 |
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Nicky82
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| A-Eadie wrote on Fri, 20 May 2011 23:07 | | sleethr wrote on Tue, 17 May 2011 17:41 | Thanks,
I have been a bit slower with the last chapters. I have been trying to use some of XoA's advice to improve my writing and that has slowed things down. Plus, work has been busy the last few weeks...no comment.
I would love to have Whisper, Syn and Zelda team up at Whateley. Stainless would be cool to work in also with the military background for her character.
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That would be cool . . . but unfortunately Zelda is in college, and too old for Whateley!
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Than she would have four years of mutant specific classes (the normal accademic classes would be confermed), seriously speaking, she's immortal so four years don't make much difference, she would have a place where she can learn how to use magic safely, she would be able to do some serious networking; what Whateley has to offer outweightes the college by order of magnitude, she can restart the college at later time (maybe in some areas that help her in PR department like Comunication Science, Psychology, Political Science).
As for being too old, Carmilla is too (sure she's officially dead as Micheal White but she has inherited his accademic curriculum) as is Eldritch (even if for very peculiar reasons) and Fling seems to be destined to enroll at Whateley as well; Bluntly put she just too powerful, she NEEDS Whateley.
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| Re: Whisper [message #39473 is a reply to message #39452 ] |
Sat, 21 May 2011 12:01 |
 A-Eadie
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| Quote: | Well... it's not like you don't have other characters who only have a origin story until now ^^
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Of which I'll be continuing after this story is complete.
| Nicky82 wrote on Sat, 21 May 2011 05:40 | | A-Eadie wrote on Fri, 20 May 2011 23:07 | | sleethr wrote on Tue, 17 May 2011 17:41 | Thanks,
I have been a bit slower with the last chapters. I have been trying to use some of XoA's advice to improve my writing and that has slowed things down. Plus, work has been busy the last few weeks...no comment.
I would love to have Whisper, Syn and Zelda team up at Whateley. Stainless would be cool to work in also with the military background for her character.
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That would be cool . . . but unfortunately Zelda is in college, and too old for Whateley!
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Than she would have four years of mutant specific classes (the normal accademic classes would be confermed), seriously speaking, she's immortal so four years don't make much difference, she would have a place where she can learn how to use magic safely, she would be able to do some serious networking; what Whateley has to offer outweightes the college by order of magnitude, she can restart the college at later time (maybe in some areas that help her in PR department like Comunication Science, Psychology, Political Science).
As for being too old, Carmilla is too (sure she's officially dead as Micheal White but she has inherited his accademic curriculum) as is Eldritch (even if for very peculiar reasons) and Fling seems to be destined to enroll at Whateley as well; Bluntly put she just too powerful, she NEEDS Whateley.
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Very good points, but remember that the characters think she's too old for Whateley, which is why they settled for Saurandin as a teacher. I am sure the administration would make an exception for her, but they haven't been asked.
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| Re: Whisper [message #39509 is a reply to message #39473 ] |
Sat, 21 May 2011 15:55 |
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Nicky82
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| A-Eadie wrote on Sat, 21 May 2011 18:01 | | Quote: | Well... it's not like you don't have other characters who only have a origin story until now ^^
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Of which I'll be continuing after this story is complete.
| Nicky82 wrote on Sat, 21 May 2011 05:40 | | A-Eadie wrote on Fri, 20 May 2011 23:07 | | sleethr wrote on Tue, 17 May 2011 17:41 | Thanks,
I have been a bit slower with the last chapters. I have been trying to use some of XoA's advice to improve my writing and that has slowed things down. Plus, work has been busy the last few weeks...no comment.
I would love to have Whisper, Syn and Zelda team up at Whateley. Stainless would be cool to work in also with the military background for her character.
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That would be cool . . . but unfortunately Zelda is in college, and too old for Whateley!
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Than she would have four years of mutant specific classes (the normal accademic classes would be confermed), seriously speaking, she's immortal so four years don't make much difference, she would have a place where she can learn how to use magic safely, she would be able to do some serious networking; what Whateley has to offer outweightes the college by order of magnitude, she can restart the college at later time (maybe in some areas that help her in PR department like Comunication Science, Psychology, Political Science).
As for being too old, Carmilla is too (sure she's officially dead as Micheal White but she has inherited his accademic curriculum) as is Eldritch (even if for very peculiar reasons) and Fling seems to be destined to enroll at Whateley as well; Bluntly put she just too powerful, she NEEDS Whateley.
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Very good points, but remember that the characters think she's too old for Whateley, which is why they settled for Saurandin as a teacher. I am sure the administration would make an exception for her, but they haven't been asked.
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Maybe after the mess with Sauradin has been solved they will contact the Accademy asking for advise.... just an idea.
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