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Re: Quareen: Outset [message #32467 is a reply to message #23556 ] Sat, 21 March 2009 20:24 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Laudator  is currently offline Laudator
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Registered: February 2009
Very good. Encore!

I must know the significance of the golden iron-bound bottle. Smile

[Updated on: Sat, 21 March 2009 20:52]

Re: Quareen: Outset [message #32468 is a reply to message #32466 ] Sat, 21 March 2009 20:35 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Arkain  is currently offline Arkain
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Registered: July 2008
Talhe wrote on Sat, 21 March 2009 17:18

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Please contact Tensai for all your turkey-slapping needs.


Is this turkey a real turkey, or the metaphorical one that dwells in us all?

I'm continuing to enjoy the way the characters interact with each other; it seems to flow well and realistically, with no forced dialogue anywhere.

I try to treat it as a novella, not as a quick fix, so I should hope so. ;D


Rar!
Calvin: "The moral of the story -- snow goons are bad news."
Hobbes: "You tend to have very specific morals."
Re: Quareen: Outset [message #73163 is a reply to message #23556 ] Thu, 21 February 2013 01:10 Go to previous message
Grey Shadow  is currently offline Grey Shadow
Messages: 44
Registered: February 2012
Location: Australia
Thank you for this story. I've enjoyed the flow and descriptions you've displayed so far.

I know its been some time since the last post, but I would like to read more.

Thanks again!
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