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Re: Quareen: Outset [message #32467 is a reply to message #23556 ]

Sat, 21 March 2009 20:24

Laudator
Messages: 941
Registered: February 2009

Very good. Encore!

I must know the significance of the golden iron-bound bottle. Smile

[Updated on: Sat, 21 March 2009 20:52]

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Re: Quareen: Outset [message #32468 is a reply to message #32466 ]

Sat, 21 March 2009 20:35

Arkain
Messages: 170
Registered: July 2008

Talhe wrote on Sat, 21 March 2009 17:18

Quote:

Please contact Tensai for all your turkey-slapping needs.

Is this turkey a real turkey, or the metaphorical one that dwells in us all?

I'm continuing to enjoy the way the characters interact with each other; it seems to flow well and realistically, with no forced dialogue anywhere.

I try to treat it as a novella, not as a quick fix, so I should hope so. ;D

Rar!
Calvin: "The moral of the story -- snow goons are bad news."
Hobbes: "You tend to have very specific morals."

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Re: Quareen: Outset [message #73163 is a reply to message #23556 ]

Thu, 21 February 2013 01:10

Grey Shadow
Messages: 44
Registered: February 2012
Location: Australia

Thank you for this story. I've enjoyed the flow and descriptions you've displayed so far.

I know its been some time since the last post, but I would like to read more.

Thanks again!

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