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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62766 is a reply to message #61355 ] Thu, 02 August 2012 16:10 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Niknokitueu
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Thrythlind wrote on Tue, 10 July 2012 00:30
dr. bibber wrote on Tue, 10 July 2012 05:17
Thrythlind wrote on Mon, 09 July 2012 06:01
I generally find people are most annoyed by their own behaviours reflected back. Have a handful of people that are self aware enough to realize their own hang ups. But most of the time I write teens as anything but.

Teens???? Most of my 'adult' colleagues are no better.


Real life, yes, harder to get away with in fiction. At least with a main character who is an adult. Real life doesn't have to contend with complaints like "no one is that stupid"

Sorry, just have to add that reality is unrealistic.

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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62768 is a reply to message #62766 ] Thu, 02 August 2012 17:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Niknokitueu wrote on Fri, 03 August 2012 05:10
Thrythlind wrote on Tue, 10 July 2012 00:30
dr. bibber wrote on Tue, 10 July 2012 05:17
Thrythlind wrote on Mon, 09 July 2012 06:01
I generally find people are most annoyed by their own behaviours reflected back. Have a handful of people that are self aware enough to realize their own hang ups. But most of the time I write teens as anything but.

Teens???? Most of my 'adult' colleagues are no better.


Real life, yes, harder to get away with in fiction. At least with a main character who is an adult. Real life doesn't have to contend with complaints like "no one is that stupid"

Sorry, just have to add that reality is unrealistic.

Have Fun!
Niknokitueu



Long before I'd even heard of tvtropes.org, that was explained to me as:

"Probable impossibilities are preferred to improbable possibilities."


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62769 is a reply to message #59523 ] Thu, 02 August 2012 21:30 Go to previous messageGo to next message
GuesssWho  is currently offline GuesssWho
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Real life doesn't have a plot, so any random shit can happen. Unbelievable things can happen because reality doesn't need you to believe it.
Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62777 is a reply to message #62769 ] Fri, 03 August 2012 14:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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GuesssWho wrote on Thu, 02 August 2012 18:30
Real life doesn't have a plot, so any random shit can happen. Unbelievable things can happen because reality doesn't need you to believe it.


And real life isn't Protagonist Driven. You don't just hear about one person's attempt to leap from a five story building onto a moving truck. You get to see on YouTube 1736362** different stupid people all trying it on their own because they heard from a friend of a friend that someone they knew heard someone made it. If you have an incredibly unlikely event but there are milllions of independent tries, sooner or later you get a success. (Otherwise no one would ever win a lottery.)

** rough estimate based on the number of YouTube clips I've seen of stupid people doing stupid things

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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62778 is a reply to message #62777 ] Fri, 03 August 2012 15:07 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Diane Castle wrote on Fri, 03 August 2012 20:18
GuesssWho wrote on Thu, 02 August 2012 18:30
Real life doesn't have a plot, so any random shit can happen. Unbelievable things can happen because reality doesn't need you to believe it.


And real life isn't Protagonist Driven. You don't just hear about one person's attempt to leap from a five story building onto a moving truck. You get to see on YouTube 1736362** different stupid people all trying it on their own because they heard from a friend of a friend that someone they knew heard someone made it. If you have an incredibly unlikely event but there are milllions of independent tries, sooner or later you get a success. (Otherwise no one would ever win a lottery.)

** rough estimate based on the number of YouTube clips I've seen of stupid people doing stupid things

Diane


How do you manage to write Ayla? Very Happy If you watch that many stupid youtube videos? ^^


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62779 is a reply to message #62777 ] Fri, 03 August 2012 15:19 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Diane Castle wrote on Fri, 03 August 2012 20:18
GuesssWho wrote on Thu, 02 August 2012 18:30
Real life doesn't have a plot, so any random shit can happen. Unbelievable things can happen because reality doesn't need you to believe it.


And real life isn't Protagonist Driven. You don't just hear about one person's attempt to leap from a five story building onto a moving truck. You get to see on YouTube 1736362** different stupid people all trying it on their own because they heard from a friend of a friend that someone they knew heard someone made it. If you have an incredibly unlikely event but there are milllions of independent tries, sooner or later you get a success. (Otherwise no one would ever win a lottery.)

** rough estimate based on the number of YouTube clips I've seen of stupid people doing stupid things

Diane

So Ayla is more or less autobiographic? This number makes me think back to "Oh, roughly 0.96 times per day for the entire school term. On average."


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62988 is a reply to message #62779 ] Tue, 07 August 2012 16:48 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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so, was tempted to have them on the top level, but decided it was too canon bending...trying to keep in canon as much as I am able

and I don't know enough about Lady Liberty and Pucelle to say they don't both have a class together...

not sure I got Pucelle quite right...and decided not to name the Tigers yet, but figured there'd be a small handful in various politics classes

just so they could rabble rouse


also...I think it's funny that Wyrmling has avoided, without realizing it, doing something that would have earned her lots of combat time

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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62989 is a reply to message #62988 ] Tue, 07 August 2012 17:03 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Isn't Medusa a little young to recognize Aunghadhail? I can understand her having heard of the Daughter of the Burning Oak, but to recognize her by sight?
Also, I would have thought that as a contemporary of the Olympians that she would have recognized the Artificer, and have gotten hung up on that instead.

[Updated on: Tue, 07 August 2012 17:06]

Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #62990 is a reply to message #62989 ] Tue, 07 August 2012 17:44 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I hadn't thought of the Artificer...doh....but actually Medusa was connected to the Titans and Gaia, who is a contemporary of Aunghadail

hmmm...can switch that out real quick though


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #63018 is a reply to message #59523 ] Wed, 08 August 2012 00:06 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Random takes her worldview from movies? That is going to lead to some weird though patterns. She probably sees herself as bad guy by default, because of that.


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #63026 is a reply to message #63018 ] Wed, 08 August 2012 04:16 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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hjgz89 wrote on Wed, 08 August 2012 13:06
Random takes her worldview from movies? That is going to lead to some weird though patterns. She probably sees herself as bad guy by default, because of that.


some are already showing...like the fact she doesn't want to go into a shower room anymore, because she's afraid the rules will say she has to kill someone if she does


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #63032 is a reply to message #63026 ] Wed, 08 August 2012 05:07 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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She just needs a healthy dose of disrespect for authority. Rules are a lot less stressful once you realize there's no such thing as an unbreakable rule. There's only consequences for breaking a rule, in most situations there is absolutely nothing stopping anyone from breaking any rules. Of course, this becomes stressful once again when you start driving...


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #63038 is a reply to message #63032 ] Wed, 08 August 2012 07:38 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Thrythlind  is currently offline Thrythlind
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Ugg no

Disrespect for authority is no better than blind obedience and most of the time it is worse.

Most rules are common sense things we should be able to figure out for ourselves. The only reason a lot of rules and laws are put into written or otherwise coherent tangible form is because someone, somewhere did something stupid.

For the most part rules exist for good reason, and while no rule is 100% appropriate all of the time, following a good rule is most often the right choice.

The problem isn't respect or disrespect for authority, it's the fact that she has difficulty in identifying whether something is an actual authority or not.

Authority implies that one is an expert on some matter. You should always respect authority and listen to it because an actual authority knows what they're talking about. The problem comes when said authority is not around for a particular situation and thus are not able to point out the exceptions or when people try to apply to advice of an authority to a matter on which they are not an authority.

People tend to equate following rules and obeying the law with a lack of individuality or being sheep and think that the rules breakers are inherently more free and less restrained.

This is false. Rules breakers are just as constrained by rules as anybody else just in different ways. Some people break rules just because they don't want to be told what to do. This is not an expression of free will, it is another way of reacting to the rules. And that is the key word "reacting". Other rulesbreakers are constrained by a situation into breaking the rule because it is the only way they think they can get past a situation.

An actual expression of free will is often hard to identify because a lot of the time people exert their will they end up doing things within the rules.

The difference is free will. The rule and it's consequences might guide your action, but ultimately it's your choice.

All in all, I tend to find maverick loner types who play fast and loose with the rules as being as much sheep following instinct as anybody else.

Random recognizes that her rules lack authority in some cases but refuses to admit that even to herself. Her rules would work great if she's stuck in facility with people trying to kill her or her friends, but in common life, much less so.


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #63048 is a reply to message #63038 ] Wed, 08 August 2012 13:02 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Ninsaneja  is currently offline Ninsaneja
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I gotta ask, after hearing that, do you follow the speed limit when you drive?

Most people break probably a half dozen actual laws every day, and that's not even taking into account minor laws that they don't know about. When it comes to less-enforced rules like "rules" about social interaction, people are even less diligent.

If that's not disrespect for authority, I don't know what is.

Plus, once you realize that not only were the laws made, in general, by the same class of idiots that you yell at in traffic every day, they were made by a committee of the same... It's hard to take them seriously as a moral guideline.

I mean, technically speaking, it's illegal to wear a belt in Massachusetts (due to a formatting error in a weapons law) but no one actually enforces or pays attention to that.


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Re: An Uncanny Valley Girl - Discussion [message #63049 is a reply to message #63048 ] Wed, 08 August 2012 13:18 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
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Unless I am in a situation where I'd gladly pay $100-$300 dollars in order to arrive a few minutes earlier...no, I don't speed.

also, currently living in Japan, so don't want to think what will happen to me if I get caught speeding here

and you're confusing authority "entity that has knowledge on the subject" with "entity which makes rules"

unfortunately common error

disrespect for authority would be telling off Steven King when he tries to give you some advice on writing

in addition, the existence of people who disrespect authority, even in small ways from people that otherwise follow the rules, in no way proves that it's not a bad idea


also, just because willy nilly breaking laws is a bad idea doesn't mean there's never a reason to break them

laws and rules are written for a specific set of circumstances, and when a set of circumstances for which the writers had not conceived arises, then following them could get you in trouble or it could get out of trouble

at that point the rule isn't really operating under authority, it's just being applied arbitrarily

that's the thing...you have to apply your will to the issue and make a decision based on benefit and consequence

most of the time the risks involved in most of the behaviors for which their are rules are, in and of themselves, too high even before the legal consequences set in

drugs for example...never going to try, never have tried, never will...risks are too high

alcohol...tried it once or twice, but by and large it tastes terrible and will make you stupid, so even without the laws about drinking, not worth the consequence

violence...getting into a fight has four possible endings: neither person significantly injured, you significantly injured/dead, the other person significantly injured/dead, both people significantly injured/dead

there's one result out of four that doesn't result in dangerous injury for one or another person....not worth the risk if you can avoid it..sparring, of course, is another matter

but some rules and laws are ridiculous or you simply have little to no choice but to deal with them...

for one example, my family technically broke the law the one year we lived in Louisiana since we continued to call ourselves white, when legally, at the time, only my Dad could make that claim...

My Mom is 1/32nd black and the rest of us are 1/64th....back in 1984 the law was still on the books that 1/64th was black...it has since been changed to be optional

by the way, most of my family looks English/Irish, I look rather German/Icelandic.....

my parents discussed the issue at the time and decided that going along with the law would cause more problems than it would solve...

at which point, you're not disregarding authority, you've listened to it and made a decision

[Updated on: Thu, 09 August 2012 09:55]


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