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Re: Sunbeam [message #57324 is a reply to message #38992 ] Thu, 26 April 2012 08:53 Go to previous messageGo to next message
GuesssWho  is currently offline GuesssWho
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I'd think those code names would be taken.
codenames [message #57326 is a reply to message #38992 ] Thu, 26 April 2012 09:10 Go to previous messageGo to next message
mikisha  is currently offline mikisha
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You're right. DC has a character called 'Imp', and there's almost certainly somebody called 'wolf' (UK TV gladiator?)

Maybe Jack and Miki could claim prior works, since they ARE an imp and wolf, respectively.

Assuming such legal battles are outside their budget, would anybody care to suggest codenames for these two? Very Happy


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Re: codenames [message #57339 is a reply to message #57326 ] Thu, 26 April 2012 14:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Unless you're talking actual official, registered codenames, I wouldn't have thought that Miki in particular would care what anyone else thought, or if a name she liked had been used before.

I suspect that all the non-obscure devilish names will have been used somewhere. Likewise lupine names.
Re: Sunbeam [message #57340 is a reply to message #38992 ] Thu, 26 April 2012 15:05 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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'Imp' and 'Wolf' are common usage words, and can't be copyrighted or trademarked. Miki would only get in trouble over the DC 'Imp' thing if her distinctive likeness was based on or easily confused with the DC Imp.

Distinctive Likeness is very big in Intellectual Propery issues. A while back, the widow of the DC writer who created Superboy sued 'Smallville' because while they very pointedly didn't use the term 'Superboy' they used tons of the distinctive likenesses in an attempt to weasel out of a settlement made years ago.


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Re: Sunbeam [message #57345 is a reply to message #38992 ] Thu, 26 April 2012 15:52 Go to previous messageGo to next message
mikisha  is currently offline mikisha
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Thanks for the advice, everybody. I'm gonna take Bek's line, though (because it says what I wanna hear, heh).

Turns out the DC comics character 'imp' was some kind of giant seahorse, so I guess there's no issue there.

Jack would be perfectly happy with the codename 'Jack' Rolling Eyes


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Progress [message #57622 is a reply to message #38992 ] Wed, 02 May 2012 09:48 Go to previous messageGo to next message
mikisha  is currently offline mikisha
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Ah, getting back into the swing of this thing. Part 14 is written up, just needs a couple of pictures. Smile

Whee!


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Re: Progress [message #57627 is a reply to message #57622 ] Wed, 02 May 2012 16:07 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Mr Pumblechook  is currently offline Mr Pumblechook
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mikisha wrote on Wed, 02 May 2012 23:48
Ah, getting back into the swing of this thing. Part 14 is written up, just needs a couple of pictures. Smile

Whee!


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Re: Sunbeam [message #57727 is a reply to message #57324 ] Fri, 04 May 2012 20:47 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Beyond the fact that we now know that Roger Milton is making the area a haven for mutants (or at least Sunbeam thinks he is), no really new info, but a fair amount of clarification.
Re: Sunbeam [message #57735 is a reply to message #38992 ] Sat, 05 May 2012 08:54 Go to previous messageGo to next message
mikisha  is currently offline mikisha
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Yeah, this story is partly about Sunbeam and Coolhand, but also about Jack and Miki. Also, new person: Coolhand's cousin Debbie!

She knows his secret, but he somehow doesn't know hers (hint: he's an idiot).


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Re: Sunbeam [message #57740 is a reply to message #57735 ] Sat, 05 May 2012 12:20 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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mikisha wrote on Sat, 05 May 2012 14:54
Yeah, this story is partly about Sunbeam and Coolhand, but also about Jack and Miki. Also, new person: Coolhand's cousin Debbie!

She knows his secret, but he somehow doesn't know hers (hint: he's an idiot).


Well, I'd never figured that ^^ I can really understand why the goon would go to the MCO. Where else could you go if you'd been drawn to deep into mutant shit?
I mean you have people running around with powers that can make them godlike. What can a normal person do after being influenced by an esper? Go to the police after being thought for murder, because a mutant used you to kill the guy who insulted her on the street?
I'd go to the MCO first, they're more likely to believe you instead of just putting you into prison.


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Re: Sunbeam [message #57849 is a reply to message #38992 ] Mon, 07 May 2012 03:27 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I've finally got around to reading this - wow!
It's certainly a different approach to a WU story, but it definitely "works".

I'd hazard a guess by her attitude towards life that developmentally, Miki's probably in her tweens (i.e. what US schools would call "Junior High" - the 9-13ish area between childhood [primary] and teenage [high]) - in a way she reminds me of the TLW with her enthusiasm and inability / unwillingness to think things through or consider the consequences.

Jack is, for fairly obvious reasons, harder to place. He's filling a kind of older brother / mentor role and is much more down to earth - it's just annoying for him that his current 100% canine form makes communication with anyone other than Miki or telepaths rather difficult.

Sunbeam - not necessarily non-TG male beforehand. Plenty of genetic women hate their bodies, and she'd been, say, a fairly average or perhaps slightly overweight, not really noticeable girl beforehand then suddenly gets transformed into a stunning beauty, then that would cause mixed feelings given her strong anti-mutant stance. Add onto that she can harness the power of the sun so considers herself to be potentially a very dangerous mutant who could cause widespread damage and devasation, and the combination could certainly tip her into the "kill yourself and as many other mutants as possible" camp.

As for our criminal gang, the MCO do seem the best bet to contact with regards to their suspicions about Sunbeam. Given their history, the police or heroes probably wouldn't believe them, and if they heard about the gang's occupation, would probably try to jail them asap. The MCO, however, especially if the local branch is friendly with organisations such as H1!, would be far more likely to take their story seriously. Although what action they could take over someone who could literally instantly cremate any foes...
Re: Sunbeam [message #57869 is a reply to message #57849 ] Mon, 07 May 2012 14:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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mittfh wrote on Mon, 07 May 2012 02:27
The MCO, however, especially if the local branch is friendly with organisations such as H1!, would be far more likely to take their story seriously. Although what action they could take over someone who could literally instantly cremate any foes...


Sniper rifle? And hope she doesn't have a explosive response to death?

I think a good number of these powerful and dangerous mutants can be taken out relatively easily with a sniper and the right ammo. Even Fey and Bladedancer fell victim to sniper fire in one of the sims.


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Re: Sunbeam [message #57910 is a reply to message #38992 ] Tue, 08 May 2012 07:53 Go to previous messageGo to next message
mikisha  is currently offline mikisha
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For sure, Sunbeam's not that difficult to take out, but that uncertainty is the kicker. She might not blow up, but she's told the gang that she's barely in control of her powers, and that's all anybody has to go on at the moment.

Then again, if she's planning to blow up anyway, I'd rather shoot her and take the chance. Very Happy

Is there any history of other mutants detonating or releasing their powers on death? Nothing comes to mind.


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Re: Sunbeam [message #57916 is a reply to message #38992 ] Tue, 08 May 2012 12:58 Go to previous messageGo to next message
mittfh  is currently offline mittfh
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I suppose the best way to deal with Sunbeam is to work out a way of luring her away from areas where people are likely to live or congregate. Given how recently she turned up, she's probably an unknown to the authorities. So while she may be susceptible to a sniper bullet, if she's got a danger sense (unlikely but possible) she'd be able to detect it, neutralise it, and also neutralise the sniper. Even if she didn't have a danger sense, there's a chance she could explode even if killed instantly.

The problem, of course, is working out how to lure her away from habitation - if she's smart she won't have established an identifiable pattern to her attack locations...

-oOo-

Meanwhile, a thought regarding Miki's codename: how about using the specific variety of imp she originally was before evolving / transforming into her current form, or something based on that?

Jack's harder - and something like Canis sapiens is a bit unwieldy even if pretty accurate. Perhaps a portmanteau along the lines of Canisapien?

[Updated on: Tue, 08 May 2012 12:58]

Re: Sunbeam [message #57927 is a reply to message #57916 ] Tue, 08 May 2012 15:27 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
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