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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #57467 is a reply to message #42912 ] Sun, 29 April 2012 13:04 Go to previous messageGo to next message
mittfh is currently offline mittfh
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That's certainly a cliffhanger and a half! If the Administration have any sense, they'll have deliberately publicised a later time for the transfer than is actually scheduled, as the very fact it needs to be placed in a secure container provided by ARC (not ARK!) should be enough of an indication that several groups are going to want to get their hands on it.

Meanwhile, someone brave / stupid enough to ask Anu out on a date. Ouch. Let's hope the date doesn't include a friendly sparring session... Very Happy
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #57485 is a reply to message #57467 ] Sun, 29 April 2012 16:10 Go to previous messageGo to next message
dr. bibber is currently offline dr. bibber
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I resemble that remark Very Happy
Let's see who on campus would love to spar with Anu, Tony, Tennyo, Powerpoint or what's his name from the Limpies, several from the physical arts teams, ...

Yours, Leo
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #57528 is a reply to message #57467 ] Mon, 30 April 2012 02:15 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Insane Hiker is currently offline Insane Hiker
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That's certainly a cliffhanger and a half! If the Administration have any sense, they'll have deliberately publicised a later time for the transfer than is actually scheduled, as the very fact it needs to be placed in a secure container provided by ARC (not ARK!) should be enough of an indication that several groups are going to want to get their hands on it.


It's ARC now, thanks for the correction. The time they sent is the container's ETA, Security knows because it is routine for important packages to be cleared ahead of time. As for needing the secure container that is mainly a precaution on the part of Administration. Remember Ms Carson knows that the pearl is old, magic and Eastern Court nothing else, what would you do with something like that especially when it looks like something very valuable that someone that is impulsive and good at ignoring their common sense (like most teenagers) wouldn't hesitate to take it or maybe even try to use the thing.

[Updated on: Mon, 30 April 2012 02:16]

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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #57538 is a reply to message #42912 ] Mon, 30 April 2012 06:30 Go to previous messageGo to next message
brooke erickson is currently offline brooke erickson
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Still interesting.

But there are a few things that are getting on my nerves a bit:

Astral *plane*, not plain.

"Wring his neck" (and wringing hands, etc)

And "you're" is short for "you are". "Your" means "belonging to you".

[Updated on: Mon, 30 April 2012 06:30]

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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #57543 is a reply to message #57538 ] Mon, 30 April 2012 09:58 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Insane Hiker is currently offline Insane Hiker
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Thanks for spotting the typos, corrections made.
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #57763 is a reply to message #57543 ] Sat, 05 May 2012 22:32 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Isodecan is currently offline Isodecan
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So despite all the discussions about guarding the pearl during transport, someone had the balls to go after it while it was still in Doyle.
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #57891 is a reply to message #42912 ] Mon, 07 May 2012 21:00 Go to previous messageGo to next message
brooke erickson is currently offline brooke erickson
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You've got Tiamat glaring at fog bank. But I can't find a previous mention of it. It's just suddenly being referred to.

So either the mention isn't there, or it needs to be more prominent.
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #57900 is a reply to message #57891 ] Mon, 07 May 2012 23:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Insane Hiker is currently offline Insane Hiker
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You've got Tiamat glaring at fog bank. But I can't find a previous mention of it. It's just suddenly being referred to.


It was first pointed out between the giant-hovering three-eyed head and the drider whose top-half resembled a blue-skinned woman. However I am about to post some corrections to the chapter, as for who is who in Tiamat's court they'll appear again during the concluding chapter in more prominent roles than a cameo.
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #58130 is a reply to message #57900 ] Sat, 12 May 2012 23:46 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Insane Hiker is currently offline Insane Hiker
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Okay another chapter posted, one thing that I ask though if anyone guesses what's really going on based on the clues please don't say it on the forum and spoil it for everyone else. If you want to run your guess by me do it please do so using the Private Messenger.

[Updated on: Sun, 13 May 2012 15:30]

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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #58179 is a reply to message #42912 ] Sun, 13 May 2012 15:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
mittfh is currently offline mittfh
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You do like making stuff complicated Smile

Last week we had no pearl - now we've got too many! I haven't the foggiest idea who's got the real pearl, but presumably at some point this morning someone was canny enough to create a whole bunch of fake pearls - the idea presumably being to keep all other thieves happy until it was too late.

Oh, and Sara siccing Schrödinger on the Goths - priceless! Very Happy
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #58672 is a reply to message #42912 ] Mon, 21 May 2012 05:41 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Nicky82 is currently offline Nicky82
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And so the source of this chaos was the Monkey King messing with those interested in stealing the pearl, LOL!!!

It's good to see the girl finally being born, I hope we will get to see the aftermath of this whole mess, how are the Obsidian Circle going to react? What will happen to Belphegore (he WAS the one who stole the pearl..... oh, maybe a Dark Lady Astarte sim with all the other that tried to steal it Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil )? How will the FSA react to the news? Will Hyppolita tell about Nikki and Sara? (Is there anything to be told there? There are rumors about Fey being the Queen of Sidhe back from death and EVERYONE knows that Sara is a demon, I don't think that Faolan knows about the blood oat and if she did she would never suggest to spill the beans over it.) Considering that Olivia was born with a teen body and that she was (for obvious reasons) naked, will Peeper start to sell pics of her? If so, will we see the Wrath of Carson befall on him? What will be Apparitia's take on this whole mess?
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #58682 is a reply to message #58672 ] Mon, 21 May 2012 10:38 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Insane Hiker is currently offline Insane Hiker
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No Faolan doesn't know anything about the blood oath between Nikki and Sara, but she does know about Hippolyta being in a relationship with Sara, while the rumors of Fey being a Sidhe Queen might be around few realize what that truly means. Also the story is not over yet, I plan on doing that when Olivia officially becomes a student. By the way how do you like Olivia's name?
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #58689 is a reply to message #58682 ] Mon, 21 May 2012 11:37 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Insane Hiker wrote on Mon, 21 May 2012 16:38
By the way how do you like Olivia's name?

Olivia reminds me Popeye's girlfriend..... I would have prefered something like Laetitia, after the roman goddess of happiness.
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #58690 is a reply to message #58689 ] Mon, 21 May 2012 12:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Insane Hiker is currently offline Insane Hiker
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Um I'm talking about her real name, not her code name. Still I see your point how about Lesley meaning joy.
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Re: Faolan Discussion [message #58745 is a reply to message #58690 ] Tue, 22 May 2012 09:22 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
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Insane Hiker wrote on Mon, 21 May 2012 18:18
Um I'm talking about her real name, not her code name. Still I see your point how about Lesley meaning joy.

Yeah, Olivia Margaret Carson, that's exactly what we both were talking about.

As for Lesley.... I don't know, it just doesn't sound right to me.
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